Saturday, April 4, 2009

tanka #1

cherry in full bloom
poised to release its petals
clinging to this moment
I suddenly recall
I am well past my prime


martin said...
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martin said...

No, you're not. When you stop breathing that's when you're past your prime. my email is!

Fathers Philosopher said...

:D this is nice to read

diana l. said...

Thank you both!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

I like this one very much. Well done.

love, Melanie

diana l. said...

Thanks, Melanie.