Tuesday, March 10, 2009

64th


most fragrant haiku

formed with love by a small boy

five crocus bouquet

3 comments:

The Crow said...

I hadn't considered that an act of love, of the physical realm, could in itself form haiku...but, of course!

Anonymous said...

Fifty years ago, I went up to Greenwood Park Bungalow Colony in the Catskills with my parents for the summer. When I saw that this poem was your sixty forth and it was about a boy and a bouquet…


moonlit floor
the scent of sumac wafts
through the shadows

diana l. said...

Thank you, The Crow. Nora, from the (now) spring (then winter) haiku blog inspired the concept of "concrete haiku" for me.

So glad this haiku rekindled pleasant memories for you, martin.